holy crap this song is awsome
I love this song i took five seconds with it picked up my guitar and solod the shit out of it
this song is amazing its so heartfelt and meaningful and i just felt like busting my heart open and wailing out the most intricate guitar solo of my life
This sounds like it was ripped off sim city
This could be a real song that you made yourself but like the reviewer below me it sounds like it was ripped off a keyboard or a video game.
that and jazz is a pretty pretentious genre. Especially so if it's putting forward stuff that's so generic and tasteless it's that it's like the crappy food they serve at the alternative eateries they play this music at.
keep trying man i wanna see if you have the soul to put forward a good jazz track
The mixing with the drumz and the theme is bad but
overall this song has some good ideas but they could have been executed better. It's decent enough but i definetely would have given it much bigger points if you played the themes on real guitar and real bass and then added synth loops on top with a piano.
In fact i think im gonna do that for this song :)
keep trying though man
bad instrument selection
First ill focus on the mixing. This is hip hop and the drums are tinny and dry not good you need to make them fuller sonically. Secondly the instruments are not reminicent of hip hop at all. They might be reminicent of electro but the rythm is uninspired sounding and has no real hook.
I'm not really sure what this song is trying to be. It's uber experimental and has electro feelings at some points and an extreme industrial lean. Now hip-hop does have a lot of electro in it nowadays but this song just doesnt feel like hop hop or rap to me.
It's like what would happen if Tiesto was 10 and he tried to make rap using his trance instruments
i mean rap never uses delay EVER and it rarely and i mean SUPER rarely ever uses phasers. Rap and hip hop majorly sample other songs to create a sound thats funky.
and the worst thing of all is i hear no bass whatsoever. all the synths come in seperately and when they do play together they dont fit together to make a cohesive whole they sound bad by themselves adn they sound worse together.
I apologize for ripping apart this track but its just extremely unappealing
low quality... Even for fanbase remixes
the piano is clipping in the audio file becuase its too loud. It doesnt seem like there was any mixing or thought that went into how to make this peice.
It seems like you just got the idea hey I love this ff song so im gonna take a mid and import it into fruity loops and change all the instruments to electric piano.
it would sound better if you actually played the song on piano maybe you could get some credit. Otherwise there is nothing really groundbreaking or interesting about this song and it's low quality even for fanbase remixes.
1º. Its loud because i record it like that, and i like it like.
2º. I dont mix ANYTHING that i record with my Gw-7 piano
3º. I hate midis, i hate people who use them
4º. I spend with my friend 3 days and abour 20 hours to record this song.
5º- if you can accept tha we play this song, your damn problem
6º. I dont record it with mic, it was with both keyboards conected to my computer
7º. Any mistake on the song is because that song was so damn tired to play, we record 30-40 segs per day.
8º. Low quality my ass
9º. You dont like it, save yourself your comments and votes , ok?
10º. its not electric piano "genius", its classical piano, buy a better speakers.
11º. I dont continue writting because what im about to write cold get banned for offensive, im so damn angry with you and the other damn people who vote 0 and 1 only because they dont like the song o because you cant play piano, save your words, and if its low quality, buy the fucking disc, ok?
Very bad hardcore
very bad and very short music reminicent of early Rave music its got everything thats bad about current hardcore music.
overall not a very enjoyable song it could use more effort
its SUPPOSED to suck. if you dont get it. i guess not. and why would i put effort into something that.. sucks.
Interesting stuff
Sounds like a very industrial menu music could be used in a stealth game or a semi gothic or violent game
Yeah I Never Thought About A Stealth Gmae But Thats A Great Idea :D
this is definetely glitchy techy and bassy
congrats you have made a find glitch tune with some oldskool rave hardcore elements.
not really dnb
it's a good effort
you almost made acid trance but unfortunately u were focusing on dnb which is weird because this song focuses on a 4/4 kick and drum and bass songs aren't supposed to be so streamlined and predictable.
this song is unfortunately not a dnb song simply because of that fact. the drumz in the background have no rythm or relationship witht he other drum parts. it just makes it sound like annoying loud white noise in the background
mostly when i listen to this song i just listen to the main synthbass loop that your using i just ignore the drums
keep trying tho
interesting song
this song is very confusing
at first it sounds like a kind of breaktrance or almost an electro song then it turns into
psytrance... very very fast psytrance that can almost count as trancecore. then it bursts back into its breakdown with breakbeat.
very confusing but a nice song
lol i guess it is a bit confusing isnt it? XD
Hm....i wasnt particularly aiming for trancecore or psytrance...mainly because i've never heard either style myself, but i guess when someone experiments, without having sampled the field, will eventually touch something they've never heard of.
Sorry it was confusing, but im glad you at least enjoyed it.
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