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[X Kal - Official Bronx Bombers]

ouch

dude if your going to do dual rapping make sure your using the same sound sample or at least putting those rap lyrics in the same place as the originals.

it sounds like you made a new wav file and then tried to align it and when you realised that you couldnt without it stuttering you said fuck it and gave up.

and the crowd cheering is just annoying and unnessecary and blocks out the beat. Then it just clips out and dissapears out of nowhere.

[Vetorman Port Mofucka]

good song. The aliens are invading.

The beginning is a little clunky with the loud obnoxious synth intro however the drums come in at just the right moments. Definetely a good techno song if not a very unorthodox one. It's great to hear something original being injected into techno.

keep writing dude and check my music if you want too.

Radish:::

[Slingshot]

Creepy

Nice song it certainly fulfills its promise of creepy and atmospheric and yet its something you don't hear all that often. Ambient Breaks. Which is usually somehting you only hear in car commercials and movie soundtracks to the matrix lol.

awsome man i love it

peace

cfx responds:

Thanks for your comments! Its good to hear a breakdown of what you like!

This tune probably has more going on than anything I've ever written to date. I tell ya it was murder to keep everything in-line, but I think the constant motion of everything paid off.

[anothersongbyrandomdude1194]

I redub this

Electro synthpop.

but w/e i guess the genre doesnt really matter anyway
its not bad. The drums are kinda repetitive and its annoying the way they keep cutting out. YOu need to switch it up introduce a new drum beat not just use the premade slices in fl studio.

the beginning part is very cool it sounds like ur mixing together the old school drum beat and adding your own kick and snare very nice.

keep writing man

randomdude1194 responds:

tahnks for the costructive reveiw!

I just decided to submit this because I haven't cotibuted to the audio portal in a while. It's a really old song and I agree with what you said and will keep it in mind. And yes, the drums are REALLY ANNOYING!
Thak you for the comments!

[singing machine]

OOOOOO PRETTY

FINALLY A GOOD TECHSTEP SONG!

I love this

BOOB DE BOOB BLIP BLEEEP~!

the robots are invading and they will assimilate your SOUL!
man keep making this shit its goldy

[elite element clan space song]

silly n fun

haha this song is kinda silly n spastic but it still makes me wanna dance.

I'm definetely giving props on this one despite inconsistent sound quality its just too fun to resist

keep writing man

apple32 responds:

thanks i will

[Drum'n'Bass-off =WB=]

NEeds some work

but overall its a nice trancestep tune.

the bass in the middle of the song is great but the synths are being drowned out by it when they come in. i would turn down the synth bass just a tad like take that treble bar on your bass and jus tturn it off. It gives more space in dnb songs (trancestep songs especially) for the synths.

the buzzy bass is great though i give you credit i love all the twitchy and trippy feelings i get from this song

keep writing man

WritersBlock responds:

Thanks for the review. Yeah, I didn't really put effort into the mix, so the interaction of the sounds could have been loads better. And as much as I love the rumbling from the bass, I agree that I could've turned it down and bring the other instruments forward.

[Give It 90 Percent]

yeahhhhhh bringin the funk aight

man ur bringing the funk back into hip hop i love you r music.

Maybe you should try your hand at house i'm sure you can make some pretty funky deep house. or even better HIP HOUSe

ooo man i havent heard a hip house track since house of pain's jump around.
you definetely need to widen your influences to keep a steady flow of good ideas but then again thats probably why my songs are all over the place

http://techno.org/electronic-music-gu ide/
if you feel like it check this site out its got like almost every single genre of electronic music and has samples of the most prevalant stuff.

sometimes the best way to get a new idea is too look at ways of incorporating old ideas.

phosphorusprocedure responds:

Wow, that's a lot of help. Thanks, man, but I really don't know what house is, let alone how to make it. I'll look at that link you gave me; that should help me out. Peace.

[Sometimes (Film Noir Beat)]

missing something

it definetely needs lyrics

this song is soo missing something
I love the classical sounds and the dark beat tho

phosphorusprocedure responds:

Yeah, I totally agree with you. Peace.

[Sophisticated Gangsters]

clownish and strange

sounds like your remixing that piano guy off of peanuts playing or sumthing over all this a pretty silly sounding song but i can see some pretty interesting possibilities with this song. good job

phosphorusprocedure responds:

I didn't know about the peanuts guy, but I tried to make it sound goofy. Peace.